drizzle: (telling a serious tale here)
𝚗𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚕𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚛𝚌𝚒𝚎𝚛 ([personal profile] drizzle) wrote in [community profile] spellminders 2017-11-05 08:30 am (UTC)

I never denied about Nines' ideas being cool or not because I bet they are.

[His apology will help placate her initial irritation. Only a tiny bit. It was clear they were sincere about their words.]

I'm simply pointing out that your wording in asking for help needs work. Never mentioned about there being a threat neither or else this conversation would be a whole lot worse.

[The moment he said the word "should", the tone of the message changed to a pretty demanding one. She had expected that type of language from her captures, but other coven members -- it was a surprise. That isn't a proper way to rally people to help out. Not to mention it reminds her of the way a certain world king demanded her to make it rain and forcefully had her leave her country for it in the name of marriage. His tone doesn't scare her in the least bit. His voice doesn't hold much in comparison to the voice of the sky when it unleashes its fury through powerful storms.]

I doubt it. Scare tactics don't do much for me in way of motivation.

[Nor do they get her to back down, even if her life is at stake. Too bad none of the religious assassins of her world were around to vouch for her. Or her fiance. Or her family. Or Neil. Or the palace soldiers. Or the thieves of the city in the Sun Kingdom. Or other princesses. Or Bardwin.]

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